对于很多初中同学来说,初中英语作文是一个大难题,一篇优秀的英语作文不仅要求语法正确、词汇丰富,还要求内容连贯、逻辑清晰。为了帮助同学们掌握更多写作技巧,多参考阅读一些优秀的满分英语作文很有必要。以下是三篇满分英语作文范文,大家可以参考。
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【写作要求】
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上,以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题,为某中学生英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
1. 目的:为贫困地区的孩子们筹款
2. 10月23日,星期六
3. 路径:学校—市中心
4. 简况:学生把自己分成四人一组,出发前计划好了一切,步行很艰辛,但活动过程中大家互相帮助,互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下,筹得善款5万多元。
5. 感受:每个人都很累,但都很高兴,因为…
注意:
1. 报道须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数80个左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the center of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50.000 yuan in the end.
We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
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【写作要求】
“保护环境,人人有责”,你想成为一名绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧!其实,环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题,写一篇短文。
注意:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:draw, both sides of the paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us.
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us.
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home, we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the lights. At school, we can collect waste paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans, and plastic bags. We shouldn't listen to pop music or spit in public.
Let’s do something to protect our environment.
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【写作要求】
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.