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高考英语作文写作小技巧,让你的英语作文秒变高大上
小新 2017-10-21 11:30:51

  高考英语对于很多人来说都是老大难问题,客观题还能靠运气,遇到英语作文就没辙,思考了很久的英语作文却得不到。但是英语作文在高考英语中占有很重要的地位,用血们也不能放弃。下面伊顿教育小编就来为光大为英语作文发愁的同学介绍四个写作小技巧,让你的英语作文秒变高大上。

  亮点一共有四种:1. 高级词汇和语法;2. 修辞手法;3. 有效的连词;4. 名人名言或谚语。

  以下简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法,以及修辞手法当中一些技巧的使用。

  一. 肯定不如否定好

  修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。

  双重否定也是种修辞,而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。

  例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。

  “几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”,写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.

  应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。

  二. 陈述不如倒装妙

  在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。

  倒装是一种较简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式,就足以应对书面表达。

  1. 否定词开头

  如果写出的句子中有否定词, 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装,用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。

  其他的否定词,如not, seldom, hardly等单词开头后面的句子,如果采用倒装都属于更好的表达。

  2. 地点状语开头

  在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子,一个建筑位于什么位置,或什么地方有什么东西,都可以应用倒装。

  例如在2006年的卷中,图书馆位于学校的中央,Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头:In the center of our school lies our library.

  表达“河岸上有很多花”:On the bank stand some flowers.

  “天空中繁星点点”:In the sky hang little stars.

  在表达地点时,把地点状语放在句首,后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构,第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾,后面还可以继续加从句,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。

  例如In the center of our school lies our library,which is between the garden and the teaching building.

  3. Only+介词短语

  在2007年卷中,“只有通过这种方式我才能增强英语”,这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.

  4. 形容词+as+主语+be动词

  例如:Young as I am, I can manage it.

  Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems.

  在2000年的高考书面表达中:Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the car’s number.

  三. 主动不如被动巧

  在近些年的阅卷中,发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态,也许是受中文思维的影响,几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中,被动语态的使用是很重要的。

  英语是一门客观的语言,而汉语是主观的语言,具体体现则是:英语经常用被动语态,而汉语经常用主动语态;

  英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头,强调一件事发生在什么人身上,而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态更符合英语的习惯。

  例如在2006年的高考中,很多学生在表达“我们每次可以借五本书较多借十天”时,都是用:We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成:At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days,得分会更高。

  四. 分词结构不能少

  前文提到,阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。

  在的高级语法中,阅卷老师较喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个较大的亮点。

  其实几乎的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构,时间状语从句,原因状语,条件状语等。例如条件状语从句:If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?

  学会下面的口诀,如果你的作文中有状语从句,马上可改成独立主格或分词结构。

  口诀:一去,二看,三改。

  一去:去连词

  二看:看主语

  三改:改分词

  If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改,第一步,去掉连词if;第二步,看前后两句话的主语,前后主语不一致,所以要改成独立主格;第三步,改分词,is 变成分词是being,所以较后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。

  如果前后两句话主语一致,就变成分词结构,例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.

  总之,高考英语作文重在设计,设计出让阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子,写出有分词,倒装,强调,修辞的句子,使整篇文章句型丰富,不单一,有效地使用连接成分使文章连贯,方能让你的作文在高考中拿到。#p#副标题#e#

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  First up, President Obama made a promise yesterday to U.S. troops.

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